Quote by fireflywishes This shows a lot of promise, but there is definitely room for improvement. First thing that jumped out at me is the outlining. It should be more crisp, because as is, it makes the piece appear low quality.
There are some anatomy issues-- the fingers are a bit too short and stubby in proportion to the arm length and body. Also, looks like you forgot to color in a piece of the sky (visible in the character's hair).
However, like I said before, the character design shows a lot of promise-- I especially like the hairstyle and the spear. I encourage you to continue to draw, and I look forward to seeing your growth in your next submission. :)
OOh! Thanks for the comment ^^. This is really help me out hehe ^^. Yeah I'm so careless T^T, and I didn't see that mistake also before you said it ^^. Thank you so much! Okay I'll continue to draw hehe ^^.